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Kevin Guiney's avatar

I so enjoyed this piece. There is so much discourse around “voice,” and this is, bar none, the clearest explanation I’ve seen articulated on the subject. There are so many AI camps now that I’m starting to lose track.

I absolutely love the framework you’ve presented. In my own writing, I use four different AIs and generally follow one of two approaches.

Sometimes I write a completely rough draft and then ask each AI to produce its own version. I then consolidate those drafts into a new document and ask each AI to synthesize the strongest elements into another draft. From there, I choose the version I like best and begin refining it: word choice, phrasing, additional examples where needed, until it feels polished to my satisfaction.

Other times, I’ll spend two hours in conversation about the topic I want to write about, exploring ideas, pushing back, and testing alternative perspectives before asking for a draft. If I’m reasonably satisfied, I move into the same refinement process. Before I finish either method, I always ask for blind spots and pushback on the thesis, then address those concerns in some way within the piece.

In the end, I can easily spend 20 hours on a 1,200-word article. And if someone asked me to describe my voice, I’d probably say: “well-articulated ideas,” or at least that’s what I aim for.

Well done, Stuart.

Donna Cusano's avatar

Hi Stuart--am learning so much from you. What I've been reacting to, the falsity of tone and approach, in most of marketing writing, you have formulated its roots via impeccable logic.

I noted your article in my Must Reads roundup for the week in Telehealth & Telecare Aware here: https://telecareaware.com/a-must-read-potpourri-the-math-of-ai-data-center-builds-healthcare-ai-failures-telehealth-in-schools-hippocratic-ais-problems-the-loss-of-empathy/

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